Poem Collection with Reflection

In RLA, we are currently having a poetry unit. We had to write ten poems with a reflection for each of them. I like poetry, it really gives out what you are feeling but, thorough words. It makes me feel safe to say something. I will share some down below.





Those are my ten poems with a reflection the most. I hope you liked them. 

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  1. Anonymous21 May 2015 at 19:44

    I think you did a great job adding alot of imagry and emotion into your poem. It really makes your poem sound better. One thing you could work on is adding more stradagys.

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  2. Anonymous21 May 2015 at 19:53

    I think your poems where all very cool and they all had a flow so when I read them in my head, they all sounded really nice.

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  3. Anonymous21 May 2015 at 20:02

    I loved your metaphor poem nature dancing! It has a lot of good description and emotion!!!!

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  4. Anonymous21 May 2015 at 20:03

    I also love your mothers day poem! It was so goo how you connected it to your own life.

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